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Inside Out.

Do you love my insides?
You know the parts you can’t see.

The parts that constructively divide,
All the places where you can’t be.

Do you love my internals?
You know all my unexploited crevices.

All the words I leave out of my journal.
The soft tissue areas that offer no benefits.

Do you love my fleshy, raw fillings?
You know the boring and bloody parts.

The features that are not made for kissing.
The invisible strokes that add to this body of art.

You see it’s my exterior that attracts you
But it’s my interior that made this possible.

So when my insecurities inadvertently attack you,
Don’t be so swift to class me as distrusting and illogical.

I need to know and to understand.

That you truly love me for who I am.

Even the parts of me you cannot see

Because those are the places where I want you to be.


Kela Lewis-Morin
Something I wrote this evening while I had some spare time finally lol Inspired by Drusila from buffy the vampire slayer of all places lol its a long story but me and gf both enjoy watching classic series its just something we do. Anyway I wanted this piece to be as if a person is speaking directly. I tried to make it a bit more informal but I still hope it works as a poetic piece. Anyway I hope you guys like it and yes I am addicted to the incorporation of rhyme I just find it adds flow.
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LindArtz Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Not some of the rosiest word choices, to conjure up images; though that was deliberate, clearly. lolz
Still it left me going "aawwww", and relating fully! :love:
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childv Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Lovely!
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AbstractX89 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't know where it classifies, but I do know that it's a good bit of writing, and that's what counts. Nicely done.
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A-Fragile-Smile Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing!
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NeoPaladinOfLight Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My dude, so good. Inspired by Drew, too? I just got through readin' about her in the Angel and Faith comic, too. She found this demon that feeds off of negative emotion, so she used him to make her sane. It was so weird seeing her not be weird.

Anyway, this fits so well. And I like that you added the flow to it, too. That's the kinda stuff that speaks to me, true.
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skyeyedangel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
very nice
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
I've used you for a poem! [link] :)
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HeatherHartung Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this piece! Great work...I could hear it as spoken word as I read it.
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Mirrasae Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013   Writer
This is poignant. Thank you for sharing.
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authorofthings Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
this is nice :)
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