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                                 Everthing that you love?
                                                                       

                                                                        And that he alone decides whether you go




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Kela lewis-morin
A little thing I wrote I tried to simplify and condense it to as little words as possible. To say well how I and I hope others share or can relate to let me know what you think I also experimented with structure to add some diversity lol
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:clap: kudos for creativity. I've rarely seen so much freedom as I've seen here.

And the meaning is soo much depth... Wow! :)
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Dyoniysus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So simple, with a powerful meaning. I really enjoyed this read =]
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
This really holds such an interesting structure... Great work! :D
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Oilux Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
Hi! Your wonderful literature has been featured on my Sunday Selects!
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ember53608 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Moving on, I think this is absolutely wonderful!!! The simplicity and spacing really gives a punch of impact!!!
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thewarrior666 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
LOL how hilarious is this! I mean, give it some space and it just seems so edgy.... wtf is wrong with you 'deviants'? 40 favourites? Not been on here long at all, and already I think deviantart sucks!
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itotallycantdraw-woo Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was extremely insulting and unnecessary.
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thewarrior666 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
It's insulting and unnecessary tht u think ur 'poem' is worthy of all the attention it has gotten when they're are so many talented and dedicated poets who receive no recognition because they don't go around favouring bollocks in order to advertise! For shame!!!
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ember53608 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
You obviously don't know what poetry is. So sad.
I can explain it if you want - Oh, no, if you have a heart enough to actually want to understand, that is.
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Writer
Worthy? and that's up for you to decide? I don't why you felt the need to comment with your negativity or what you hope to accomplish I write because I like to write and I hope that other people like my writing to. Thank you for your time and comments I know what not everyone will like my work but I hope that some do and if they do that's up for them to decide I appreciate all the comments and views I've received I am just doing what I love and as my mother always said if you have'nt got nothing good or constructive to say then don't say anything at all :)Thank you one again
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Writer
i thought the same but people are entitled to their opinions i think deviant is great and has made me a more confident person and a better writer :)
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting play on structure. Innovative.
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
ahh thank you :) i'm glad you like it :)
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No worries :)
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samwinchester14 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is truly amazing. :heart:
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
ahh thank you :) this made me smile please feel free to check out some of my other works anytime if you like :)
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Krypson Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very interesting and creative :)
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
ahh thank you :) as always i'm glad you like it
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spielmitmir26 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What happens when you let your expectations of happiness be held by others?

What happens when you don't question things, then they take advantage of you.

Sometimes the questions can be even more dangerous to your sanity when you realise where you've been placing your faith. And your blame.
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
Agreed questions are dangerous but I cant help but question everything around me. Please feel free to check out some of my other works anytime if you like :)
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kartiksharma Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Amazing Job!♥
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
ahh thank you :) this made me smile
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Phantasm1 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I see questioning can be rewarding or dangerous depending
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
Agreed but I question everything lol its a bad habit
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Phantasm1 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah but sometimes a useful one ;)
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MebutREAlizeD Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:o
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battlebrothertherix Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have to say, when I saw the little my knee-jerk reaction was that it wasn't going to be that good (nothing personal, but i've found simple names lead to simple works, sometimes at least) but it gained entry to DeviantLITERATURE, so I had to think it had at least some measure of interest, even before I looked at it.
It really is free verse - it was quite simple, in itself, but the meaning words like this can take speak a lot more than is shown.
Imagine at least one person clapping, slowly, or shaking your hand, because I most certainly would be.
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
ahh thank you :) this means a lot to me I don't want to be one of those cliche poets or writers I try and be different and just do what I love :) please feel free to check out some of my works anytime if you like :)
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timelessarii Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Ditto.
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KelaLewis-Morin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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