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There's something I got to tell you…

                                                           
The moment I hear this,
I cant help but think the worst.
Every single sinful act,
I have ever committed,
Hacks in to my main frame.


Guess what I heard about you…?


Then I wonder how on earth,
Did they un-earth the truth.
What truth have they uncovered?
Do they now see me differently?
Is that why they have been treating me differently?


Me and you have to have words…


I always dismiss the possibility of a positive response.
I begin to back track and defend myself at once.
Paranoia takes over as I start to reveal,
All of the secrets my lips promised to seal.


                                                                                                          When in actual fact it's not the case.
                                                                            A confused and baffled expression appears on their face.
                                                    As they mention something completely opposite to what I was thinking.
                                                                                 And my heart resumes to floating  instead of sinking.



Kela lewis-morin
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Something I wrote a while back. I tried to capture this moment of confusion and humility with the use of rhyme. I know rhyme makes situations sound simple and to ladi di da lol if thats even a phrase lol but yeah I hope you guys like it :) let me know what you think
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~MusesDaughter Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the ending very much. This is a good capture!
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*KelaLewis-Morin Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
awwh thank you :) that means alot to me :) please feel free to check out some of my other stuff if you like :)glad you like the ending :)
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~crystelclear1104 Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love how you've captured such simple moments so beautifully :)
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*KelaLewis-Morin Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
ahhh thank you :) so much i do try that means alot to me :) please feel free to check out some of my other stuff if you like :)
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~SulZala May 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Know that feeling all too well >_<
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*KelaLewis-Morin Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
ahhh same here but awwh thank you :) that means alot to me :) please feel free to check out some of my other stuff if you like :)
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:iconstoryweaver29:
I know how that feels.
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*KelaLewis-Morin Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
lol not a nice feeling eh
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~ReverseImaku May 23, 2012  Student General Artist
as usual, your content and the structure of the poem amazes me :D
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*KelaLewis-Morin Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
ahh thank you :) i want to continue to amaze you :)
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